tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post4240061252677030947..comments2023-10-19T05:10:11.769-05:00Comments on life at the crossroads: LifefatiN wahaBhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06805842224222470457noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-40629352534824003052009-01-08T14:36:00.000-06:002009-01-08T14:36:00.000-06:00J:: thanks... x pandai la nak cari rhym.. imean.. ...J:: thanks... x pandai la nak cari rhym.. imean.. 2 3 lines boley kot...hahha. my poem THAT dark eh.. i'll write sumting bright in future..=]fatiN wahaBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04241732715156043877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-28501427067631136072009-01-07T11:50:00.000-06:002009-01-07T11:50:00.000-06:00it's interesting that u used 'man' in "With man en...it's interesting that u used 'man' in "With man endures searching for a sanctuary to mend". not bad for a free-structure poem. i like poems that rhyme tho... much funner to read. u shud write a fun delightful poem nx time! looking forward to it.Jason Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13354147841766258187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-88363834667652785142009-01-03T07:30:00.000-06:002009-01-03T07:30:00.000-06:00mira :: arigato!!! biase 2 jer.. n dun worry dear....mira :: arigato!!! biase 2 jer.. n dun worry dear..i'm not a keep-inside-for-myself-alone person<BR/>i share..with you at least..=]<BR/><BR/>gadis as31 yg manis@asilah :: i dun think it deserve a wow! a standing ovation is fine...hahahahah!! melebih2 la plak...<BR/>sorry if you felt suffocated.. thats my feeling at that particular time.. <BR/>i'll work out... <BR/>thanks dear...<BR/>appreciate your comment..=]fatiN wahaBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04241732715156043877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-23008319937455171422009-01-03T07:08:00.000-06:002009-01-03T07:08:00.000-06:00waaahhh,, hebat2.somehow i felt suffocated reading...waaahhh,, hebat2.<BR/><BR/>somehow i felt suffocated reading the first half. like having darkness surrounding u and closing in on you at the same time it's scary.<BR/><BR/>wow. a good dark poem indeed.<BR/><BR/>the second half's more inspiring. sweet :)<BR/><BR/>keep up the good work, fa!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-27513279814538118312009-01-03T06:19:00.000-06:002009-01-03T06:19:00.000-06:00whoa~ poem mg da smkn mntap nmpk....hehehehehbt..r...whoa~ <BR/>poem mg da smkn mntap nmpk....heheheheh<BR/>bt..r u facing a alot of probs now??<BR/>sumtime,da probs need to b share my<BR/>dear....(:<BR/>wut evr epen, njoy ur life!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-27779683972562061452009-01-02T09:36:00.000-06:002009-01-02T09:36:00.000-06:00anonymous:: thanks...=]bie :: hahha!! life's brief...anonymous:: thanks...=]<BR/><BR/>bie :: hahha!! life's brief candle.. tibe2 rase kecik agi..hahah f1 rite?<BR/><BR/>ezzat ::i am an amateur...hehehe thanks...=]<BR/><BR/>eiman :: erm..poem is written whenerver i'm facing problems...to express my feeling..ehehehe i'll try to do it when i'm extra happy...LOL...=PfatiN wahaBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04241732715156043877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-72720160115724944112009-01-02T05:17:00.000-06:002009-01-02T05:17:00.000-06:00faten. aku xtau plak ko suke wat poem. next time b...faten. aku xtau plak ko suke wat poem. next time blh buat yg enjoyable sket x? =D jgn la serious sgts.ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05291624626875475080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-39349006107221868402009-01-02T02:31:00.000-06:002009-01-02T02:31:00.000-06:00awwwww.ur not an amateur!i was a lil touched. haha...awwwww.<BR/>ur not an amateur!<BR/>i was a lil touched. haha<BR/>keep up da good workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938021103703508178.post-49108417875518284042009-01-01T11:17:00.000-06:002009-01-01T11:17:00.000-06:00whoa~a bit like life's brief candle..tapi deeeeeep...whoa~<BR/>a bit like life's brief candle..<BR/>tapi deeeeeepppppper...biehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02004857961182831743noreply@blogger.com