Thursday, January 1, 2009

Life

The freezing hands are clinging onto the wounds of the past
Tears, moan, whine;
Turning against the true meaning of the story
For a cold heart, in the vein of yourselves
Melts with a warm hug, like a frost.

There will forever be sorrow and loneliness
With man endures searching for a sanctuary to mend
To front days into the room of happiness

Fates play
Even though it makes your heart ache
And a ray of light
May descend from darkness for us to grasp
To feel the fierce painful touch
To discern a persons warmth
As beautiful as it is miserable
For the great time is ephemeral.

We name this LIFE.


Fatin Wahab, Jan 2, 0033

my second poem. enjoy..
sorry...amateur..

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice.

bie said...

whoa~
a bit like life's brief candle..
tapi deeeeeepppppper...

Si Razini said...

awwwww.
ur not an amateur!
i was a lil touched. haha
keep up da good work

s.e said...

faten. aku xtau plak ko suke wat poem. next time blh buat yg enjoyable sket x? =D jgn la serious sgt

fatiN said...

anonymous:: thanks...=]

bie :: hahha!! life's brief candle.. tibe2 rase kecik agi..hahah f1 rite?

ezzat ::i am an amateur...hehehe thanks...=]

eiman :: erm..poem is written whenerver i'm facing problems...to express my feeling..ehehehe i'll try to do it when i'm extra happy...LOL...=P

mieyra said...

whoa~
poem mg da smkn mntap nmpk....heheheheh
bt..r u facing a alot of probs now??
sumtime,da probs need to b share my
dear....(:
wut evr epen, njoy ur life!!!

gadis as31 yg manis :) said...

waaahhh,, hebat2.

somehow i felt suffocated reading the first half. like having darkness surrounding u and closing in on you at the same time it's scary.

wow. a good dark poem indeed.

the second half's more inspiring. sweet :)

keep up the good work, fa!

fatiN said...

mira :: arigato!!! biase 2 jer.. n dun worry dear..i'm not a keep-inside-for-myself-alone person
i share..with you at least..=]

gadis as31 yg manis@asilah :: i dun think it deserve a wow! a standing ovation is fine...hahahahah!! melebih2 la plak...
sorry if you felt suffocated.. thats my feeling at that particular time..
i'll work out...
thanks dear...
appreciate your comment..=]

Jason G said...

it's interesting that u used 'man' in "With man endures searching for a sanctuary to mend". not bad for a free-structure poem. i like poems that rhyme tho... much funner to read. u shud write a fun delightful poem nx time! looking forward to it.

fatiN said...

J:: thanks... x pandai la nak cari rhym.. imean.. 2 3 lines boley kot...hahha. my poem THAT dark eh.. i'll write sumting bright in future..=]